His submarine met
An accident for over
Propulsion of fuel
With an octopus
So he popped up on surface
and fix it on wall
Thursday, December 30, 2010
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...Haiku is a traditional form of Japanese poetry which is in 17 syllables breaking into three lines with first and last lines in five syllables each and the middle line seven syllables. In haiku, poets address a picture vividly. The picture is about nature but the interpretation is left to the readers despite the writers thought. But some of my haiku here break free from the traditional form of haiku thematically.
haha like it finally he survived with an octopus
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