You broke my China
like someone in cinema
who is so broken
Thursday, December 17, 2009
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...Haiku is a traditional form of Japanese poetry which is in 17 syllables breaking into three lines with first and last lines in five syllables each and the middle line seven syllables. In haiku, poets address a picture vividly. The picture is about nature but the interpretation is left to the readers despite the writers thought. But some of my haiku here break free from the traditional form of haiku thematically.
broken like china
ReplyDeletebrittle pages of lives lived
Csn this be mended?
like line should be- Can this be mended?
ReplyDeletegreat one!!!
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